Analyzing an Exam to Grow: Technology and Awareness in the Way of Kendo#
After taking part in the Kendo seminar and examinations held in Calcinato (BS), Carlo Romagnoli decided to carry out an in-depth analysis of his 2nd dan exam, with the help of ChatGPT, an artificial intelligence tool capable of observing and objectively describing movements, timing, and technical choices.
The goal was not to replace the sensei or the dojo companions, but to complement them, adding a different and analytical perspective useful to better understand what happens during an exam: when the body reacts, when the mind anticipates, and when technique drifts away from spirit.
Technology can therefore only offer a neutral mirror, returning images and data that stimulate questions, awareness, and personal growth.
Here is what ChatGPT expressed:
Evaluation#
Simulated Kendo 2nd Dan Examination Grid
Kenshi: Carlo Romagnoli – no. 218 (left)
Test: Kirikaeshi + Jigeiko
Examiner: EKF simulation (5 evaluators)
Scale: 1 = insufficient | 2 = weak | 3 = adequate | 4 = good | 5 = excellent
| Criterion | Average Score | Examiner’s Comment |
|---|---|---|
| Kamae | 3/5 | Solid and formally correct, but visually stiff. Slight tension in the shoulders and left arm reduces the natural flow of movement. The body “shows” readiness, but not full relaxation. |
| Seme / Maai | 2.5/5 | Determination is present, but the seme is too explicit. There is little sense of mental pressure on the opponent — the distance closes by force rather than intention. A typical transition point between 1st and 2nd dan. |
| Datotsu (Effective Strikes) | 3/5 | Good timing on men and kote, but the cut “opens” on exit (less centered), and zanshin fades immediately after impact. Missing one or two tenths of a second of continuation to convey full conviction. |
| Zanshin | 2.5/5 | Present, but perceived more as a “closing posture” than as a living energy. It is too brief and mechanical: the body returns to kamae without maintaining visual and spiritual presence. |
| Ki Ken Tai no Ichi | 3/5 | Proper synchronization at strong moments, but some strikes are slightly rushed or performed in apnea. The kiai does not always arise from breathing but from intention. More harmony between breath, body, and impulse is needed. |
| Reihō / Attitude | 4/5 | Excellent composure, respect, and mental focus. The overall behavior conveys dedication and seriousness. A clear strength to preserve. |
| Global Impression (Hantei) | 2.8/5 | A mature Kenshi with solid basics and determination. However, energy feels compressed and martial communication not yet fluid. Appears “committed” rather than “free.” A typical borderline case: not ready yet, but close. |
Examiner’s Summary#
“Carlo shows commitment and correct fundamentals, but his seme is too explicit, and his zanshin fades too quickly.
He has the technical base for 2nd dan, but not yet the relaxed natural control expected at this level.
One more cycle of polishing will make a clear difference.”
Analysis by EKF Criteria#
1. Kirikaeshi#
Strengths:
- Good rhythm and overall control, typical of someone with a solid foundation.
- Likely strong impact and consistent kiai.
Common 2nd dan issues:
- Cut extending too far on exit: after the final men, the blade may open slightly — a symptom of excess tension in seme.
- Steps not always proportionate: if the last part of kirikaeshi looks forced or labored, it communicates stiffness.
- Zanshin: it seems to “end” right after the last strike instead of staying alive for a few steps.
What judges perceive:
“Lacks natural continuity between strike and spirit,” not that the cut itself is wrong.
2. Jigeiko (mainly men and kote)#
- The seme is too declared — both opponent and judges can see the attack coming, losing the sense of pressure.
- A long or rigid seme opens the window for counterattacks (nuki or kaeshi).
Typical reading by the panel:
“Good intention but limited effectiveness.”
They see a technically mature Kenshi, but somewhat predictable.
The exit of the strike (zanshin) can appear mechanical — the body stops right after the men or kote instead of flowing naturally in one continuous action (ikkyo ichi).
If seme arises from the body rather than from the spirit, the attack feels prepared rather than inevitable.
3. Fight Management and Perception#
At 2nd dan level, the panel focuses on:
- Maai controlled with the body, not just the shinai;
- Seme that makes the opponent react, not just one that “shows courage”;
- A relaxed yet alert attitude — visible effort (tension in shoulders, forced steps) penalizes more than technical errors.
If seme is strong but too obvious, it means the intention is right (good!) but the pressure “pushes” instead of “drawing in.”
This is known as agari-seme — the energy rises toward the opponent instead of extending forward and into the maai.
Personal Reflection#
Every time we test ourselves, make mistakes, or realize something new, we take a step forward.
Technical analysis only serves to make that step clearer — but the path always continues through daily practice.
Conclusion#
This experiment of blending tradition and modern analysis shows that even digital tools, when used with sincerity, can become part of a Kenshi’s personal growth.
Because, as an old Kendo saying reminds us:
稽古は嘘をつかない — Keiko wa uso o tsukanai
“Practice never lies.”